P5(b) Producing and Reviewing an Off Line Edit
Meaning: Producing and reviewing an off line edit means selections of shots into order and without applying any effects.
Purpose: The purpose of this section is show the audiences how I put my videos in sequence without applying any effects and show changes if any of the clips are different from the storyboard that I have originally planned.
After importing all the videos and renaming all the files, I can start my editing. It is quite easy to edit with this app, I just need to drag videos from the files that I imported to the editing log, as we can see there are loads of Video 1, Video 2, Video 3 etc. It allows me to edit the video with layers so I can add more effects to it to make it more interesting.
Underneath the video, there is a log of audio, which I could put music document or audios for this log, it combines with the video.
This is the viewing log that I am able to see what I have edited. The screen from the left is to view the videos that I imported from the original, they have not been edited. The screen from the right is to view the video that I have edited so far, both screens are very important for the editing process, because we can see the difference between before edit and after edit.
This is how the whole look of the Adobe Premiere Pro CS5 during editing. This photo is captured at the middle of my editing.
Sometimes, we do not follow the original plan, we do make some changes to it.
I am going to show what I have changed in my video from my original plan step by step.
For my original plan, I wanted this scene to be just showing the hands of the bath bombs, water and also the hands of the model. Filming the bath bombs crushing each other as the description showed below. I wanted to do this because I want the scene to follow the lyrics of the song, so I decided to ask the model to crush the bath bombs towards each other, so that the audience could have double sensation of the bath bombs crushing towards each other but also the meaning of the word "crush" literally.

However, I found difficult to film it at that angle, therefore I decided just to film it with the lower body of the model without showing her face, but her hands, bath bombs and half of her body. I think this is easier to film, and it comes out quite nice. So that the audiences could focus on the movement of the model, which I would like them to see, and also there are huge amount of space at the sides so the audiences could also see the bath bomb fizzling behind the model, showing them the effect that the bath bomb creates in the water and persuade them to purchase the product.

Originally, I wanted to film the model brushing the surface of the water with her hands, to create a very beautiful scene, however I did not have enough time for this scene, therefore I didn't film this part. It is because the bath bombs have glitter inside them, so if the model brushes the water with her hand, the water will shimmer and attracts the audience's attention, however it is too hard to control the lighting in the bath room as there are not much light to emphasis the glitter in the water, therefore I have skipped this scene.
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For the original plan, I wanted the model to smell the bath bomb, also using pink background at the back. I have decided to do so, because I would like to show the audiences that these bath bombs not only create a fabulous effect in the water, but also having a very nice scent, so I would like the model to close her eyes and smell the bath bomb, as if she is enjoying the bath bomb, so the audience will have more interest to purchase the product.
However, I found out that kissing the bath bomb shows more passion of the model towards LUSH, so I decided to change the pose, also I want the video to stick to the LUSH's products so I decided to film some videos of the bath bombs dissolving into the water and use it as a background, so it looks more effective and nice, and also showing the effect of the bath bomb while dissolving into the water, attracting them to purchase the product or interest them.
For this scene, I wanted to film the tap switching on with water falling, and reversed it so make the video more interesting, because water is needed to dissolve the bath bombs, and also water from the tap makes audience relates to shower or bath that we daily have, however I couldn't find a spot with good lighting and a water tap, so I didn't film this part too.
Originally, this scene is to show the model's hand and throwing the bath bombs into the air, I wanted to do this because this music video is about bath bombs and the theme is young and fresh, therefore I want the model the throw the bath bombs into the air to create a free and young image, however, due to the risk it might occur, that the bath bombs might hit on the model's head, or it might be crushed if the model missed one and it falls on the ground, therefore I decided to delete this scene.

For this scene, I wanted to film the bath bomb fizzling at the side of the water tank, so audiences can observe the bath bombs dissolving into the water. This scene could show not only the effect of the bath bomb in the water, but also the difference of Before & After of the bath bombs, this could amaze the audiences of what the bath bomb could do, however this is too hard, due to the lighting in the studio is hard to control, also it did not look as good as I imagine when I did a close up of the bath bomb, it is very hard to focus on it.
However, I realize that while the bath bomb was dissolving into the water, the water is too saturated that audiences could hardly see the water at the side of the tank, so I decided to film it on the top of the bath bomb, so audiences could see the solid that was releasing from the bath bomb.